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雅思写作|学会雅思写作构思,远离5.5魔咒

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       雅思写作|学会雅思写作构思,远离5.5魔咒

      雅思写作一直是同学们的难点,写着写着就跑题,准备好的模板,很难套用进去。主要还是因为文章构思有问题,今天就来和大家具体说下。



      拿到题目之后,首先要做的就是审题,然后就是根据审题之后找出的题眼,也就是关键词来进行构思。那么关键词都有哪些呢?

    一般审题时所找出的关键词有:主题词general topic、关键词keywords、题目类型question type。
以一道真题为例:In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
它的关键词分别是:health problems;fast food、impose a higher tax;agree or disagree。
找出关键词后,就要开始思考你的立场和观点。一般立场的选择都和观点相对应,但无论如何都要保证全文的立场是统一的。想出main idea之后,还要思考支撑观点的理由和例子。
然后是确定你的行文结构,一般大作文都建议使用四段式的文章结构:
Introduction:背景,表明立场
Main body1:观点+理由+举例
Main body2:观点+理由+举例
Conclusion:总结,重申立场

    最后就是筛选和组织语言,首先选择那些理由充分、举例恰当的观点,把这些观点有效地组织起来“排兵布阵”。
然后组织语言,找出题目关键信息的同义词同根词、想运用在写作中的地道短语搭配和高级句型。接着就可以进行写作啦。

    那么在构思中如果想不到idea,该怎么办呢?如何对题目进行头脑风暴呢?最简单的方法就是用提问的方法来寻找idea。说到提问题,自然离不开最经典的“5W+H”,即who、what、when、where、why、how,具体可以根据实际情况来看选用哪类问题。同时,也可以从不同角度、人物立场来思考。比如说从经济、文化、政治、法律、道德等角度思考;从宏观和微观的角度,就可以分为社会、集体和个人;如果话题涉及到不同人群,比如学生和老师、年轻人和老年人,那么就可以从不同人物立场去考虑。

    还有一些同学在写作时“文思泉涌”,恨不得把所有的idea都写进文章中,这样也是不正确的。大多数这样的文章都缺乏连贯性,严重的还会造成跑题。所以我们在考虑观点的时候,要注意筛选,避免离题。对雅思写作而言,掌握同义替换表达,就能帮助你在雅思评分标准中的“词汇丰富度”这一项中大放光彩。这里小编为大家竞选了100个雅思写作中高频用到的词汇及替换表达,建议各位同学先收藏好,每天积累一两个同义替换,等到后面你就会发现自己的词汇储备量上升一个等级!

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1. 持某观点:claim
contend, deem, reckon, assert, share the belief that 
2.支持某观点: advocate
maintain, vote for, side with, be in favor of 
3.反对某观点: contradict
criticize, be against, cast doubts on
4.合理的:justified
sensible, convincing, persuasive, rational, practicable, logical, wise, sagacious, viable, preferable, advisable, appropriate,  bear much analysis
5.好处:advantage
benefit, merit, positive side, upside, boon, pros
6.弊端:disadvantagedefect, demerit, negative side, downside, flaw, drawback, cons
7.肯定:undoubtedlyindeed, undeniably, there is no denying that
8.不确定:be likely topotentially,presumably
9.重要的:essentialsignificant, vital, crucial, critical, fundamental, indispensable
10.有益的:beneficialconducive, instrumental
11.有害的:detrimentalharmful, virulent
12.有争议的:controversialdisputable, contentious
13.普遍的:widespreadprevalent, universal
14.显著地:considerablysignificantly, remarkably, dramatically, tremendously, substantially
15.明显的:evidentapparent, manifest
16.增强:enhancestrengthen, boost
17.减少:declinedescend, collapse, relieve
18.大约:approximatelynearly, around, estimated,roughly
19.趋势:trendtendency, inclination
20.预见:predictexpect, project
21.带来:bring aboutresult in, lead to
22.产生,引起:createspark, yield, give rise to
23.建立:establishfound, institute
24.要求:call forrequest, demand
25.去除:eliminateremove, eradicate
26.探讨:exploreexamine, identify 27.表明,描绘:indicatedepict, portray, illustrate
28.满足…需求:meet the need ofsatisfy the requirement of, cater for the demand of
29.足够:adequateenough, sufficient
30.解决:tackleresolve, address
31.意识:awarenessconsciousness
32.控制:curbregulate, censor
33.解释:account forbe responsible for, be attributed to
34.投资:financeinvest in,  subsidize
35.缓解:relieveease, alleviate
36.压力:stresspressure, strain
37.遵循:observefollow, conform to
38.继承:inherithand down, carry forward
39.培养:cultivatetrain, foster
40.促进:promotecontribute to, upgrade
41.适应:adapt toadjust to, acclimate to
42.提供:providerender, afford
43.替代:replacesubstitute, take the place of
44.保护:preserveprotect, safeguard
45.证据:evidenceproof
46.赢得:gainacquire, attain
47.国外的:foreignalien, exotic
48.重视:attach importance toemphasis, highlight
49.发展:advancedevelopment, progress
50.倾向于:tend tobe inclined to, be apt to 
51. 吸引:attractallure, tempt
52. 专注的:be absorbed inbe immersed in, devote oneself to
53. 目的是:aim atThe purpose is
54. 实现:achievefulfill, implement
55. 危害:endangerthreaten; jeopardize
56. 损害:undermineimpair, damage
57. 阻碍:hinderobstruct, impede
58. 禁止:forbidban, prohibit
59. 责备:blamedenounce, criticize
60. 污染:pollutecontaminate, stain
61. 腐蚀:erodewear away, corrode
62. 欺骗:deceivecheat, defraud
63. 冲突:conflictshock, tension
64. 驱使:promptspur, incite
65. 贪婪的:acquisitivemoney-oriented, materialistic
66. 自私的:self-centeredselfish, inconsiderate
67.体谅的:considerateunderstanding, sympathetic
68.冷漠的:indifferentapathetic, aloof
69.奢 侈的:wastefulluxurious, extravagant
70.残忍的:inhumanebrutal, barbaric
71.绝望的:hopelessdespairing, desperate
72.过分的:excessiveextravagant, exorbitant
73.激烈的:intensefierce, vigorous
74.严厉的:stringentrigorous, rigid
75.与…相关:be related tobe associated with, be linked to
76.难以置信的:unbelievableincredulous, virtual
77.惊人的:extraordinarymarvelous, spectacular
78.有抱负的:ambitiousaggressive, aspirant
79.固有的:inherentnature, innate
80.稳定的:steadystable, constant
81.恶化:worsenaggravate, deteriorate
82.夸大:exaggerateoverstate
83.限制:restrainconstrain, confine
84.拆除:tear downknock down, pull down
85.加速:acceleratespeed up, precipitate
86.占优势:predominatedominate
87.分辨:distinguishdifferentiate, discern
88.抵消:counteractoffset, cancel out
89.开展:launchconduct, carry out
90.承担:assumeshoulder, accept
91.颁布, 制定:enactenforce, promulgate, map out
92.影响:influenceimpact, pervade
93.差异:differencedistinction, gap
94.交流:communicateexchange, associate
95.接触:have access tomake contact with, keep in touch with
96.优先:give priority toput…into first place
97.节约:economizeconserve, cherish
98.面临:be faced withbe confronted with
99.措施:measurestep, action
100.注意:bewareprevent, guard against

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